Wednesday, March 14, 2007

English 10 and 10H -- Letter of Complaint (as Holden Caulfield)

Assignment for March 14, 2007

Think of something that has made you angry enough to write a letter that would hopefully change whatever is wrong.

For example, if ABC has just aired your favorite movie, but made a lot of cuts that pretty much ruined it, you should write to the president of ABC and speak your mind. Or if you bought a bag of chips that was advertised “so hot, your eyes will tear up” and yet it was as mild as oatmeal, write to Nabisco and let then know what is wrong with their product. You can write a letter about almost anything these days; the newspaper you read, the clothes you buy, the roads you drive on, the music the radio DJs pick to play most often, a software program

BUT DON’T JUST COMPLAIN – write persuasively to try and get whoever is responsible to change their ways.

And now – for all you reality show fans – here’s the twist: You must write in the voice of Holden Caulfield.

Your letter should be one full page in length, in regular business letter format. The paragraphs should have single spaced lines, but with a double space between each paragraph (like this document).

Use this worksheet to write your letter – you can do the worksheet before or after the letter, but make sure it is filled out.

Letter of Complaint

Organizational worksheet

I am going to complain about

This is a (circle one):

  • Product
  • Service
  • Political issue
  • Other

What is wrong with this thing or idea?

What would make this right?

What are THREE good reasons that would motivate the person to whom you’re writing to make these changes?

1.

2.

3.

Sunday, March 11, 2007

Catcher in the Rye Reading Schedule

On this day

You need to be finished with these chapters

Tuesday, March 6

1-3

Thursday, March 8

4 and 5

Monday, March 12

6 and 7

Wednesday, March 14

8, 9 and 10

Friday, March 16

11 and 12

Tuesday, March 20

13, 14 and 15

Thursday, March 22

16 and 17

April

18 through 26 (end)

Animal Farm Reading Schedule

Chapter I (25 to 34) was read in class on February 27.

On this day

You need to be finished with these chapters

Plan out your per-day reading schedule.

Tuesday, March 6

II and III (35 to 53)

You have 6 days to read 18 pages

Thursday, March 8

IV (54 to 60)

You have 2 days to read 7 pages

Monday, March 12

V, VI and VII (61-97)

You have 4 days to read 36 pages

Wednesday, March 14

VIII (98-113)

You have 2 days to read 15 pages

Friday, March 16

XI (114-126)

You have 2 days to read 12 pages

Tuesday, March 20

X (126-135)

You have 4 days to read 9 pages

Classwork for Friday, 3/9 and Tuesday 3/13

Write a confessional, in the style of a reality TV show, for one character from Animal Farm. Only refer to events that take place between chapters I and VII.

Requirements

  • You must refer to at least two things the character said or did in the book up to Chapter VII. (Like a concrete detail)
  • The character must tell us why he or she did or said these things (like a commentary, because it is more of an interpretation than a fact)
  • The character must speak in a way appropriate to the personality that has been described (unless of course he/she has been faking an on-air personality and saves his/her real self for the confessional)
  • Have fun with it – this is a creative writing assignment.

Shaper

For those of you who need a reminder of how the SHAPER works, here's the form. Remember, the sentences go in this order:

1. Topic Sentence
2. Concrete Detail
3. Commentary,
4. Commentary
5. Concrete Detail
6. Commentary
7. Commentary
8. Concluding Sentence.

Body Paragraph #______________

Paragraph Topic: ______________________________________________

TOPIC SENTENCE

CONCRETE DETAIL 1

COMMENTARY

COMMENTARY

CONCRETE DETAIL 2

COMMENTARY

COMMENTARY

CONCLUSION